Beatiful. I loved this whole entire story and I especially love the inner monolougues you had going on both Justin and Brian. It really allowed us to get inside their heads. And even though I felt like smacking the two of them for misinterpreting each others feelings all the time.
The part about Brian when he was young and it was Christmas was a little hard to read I have to say. But it really added to the story in the end and I love what you did with Nickolai. It added the whole Christmas magic to the story, even though it is only October. :)
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Date: 14/10/07 06:51 pm (UTC)The part about Brian when he was young and it was Christmas was a little hard to read I have to say. But it really added to the story in the end and I love what you did with Nickolai. It added the whole Christmas magic to the story, even though it is only October. :)