Thank you. I really appreciate the comment about the word image of Justin's loft, because descriptive passages are the things that I have to work hardest at. As for the ending ... I don't think I'd thought of it exactly that way, but it definitely was intended to convey the sense of balance in their relationship, so thanks for noticing that too. :)
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Date: 22/10/06 12:23 am (UTC)