ext_19746 ([identity profile] ladybugkay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wren_kt7oz 2007-11-04 11:31 pm (UTC)

God, you made me love this story even more.

>>Justin watched it impassively for a moment, then he said quietly and clearly. “He’s not yours. You can’t have him. You never had him. Never have, never will.”

Excellent way to bring Michael's delusions back to reality and reference his own words. I love when that hoisted with his own petard thing happens to Michael. LOL

And Justin being both Sunshine and Rage! The whole sunshine aspect of his own Rage persona just feels so RIGHT, and since Justin (in canon) does have that wild, occasionally violent temper, it's actually incredibly fitting that he turns out to be the inspiration for Rage in this story. It was a brilliant twist to a brilliant story. I really, really adore this story, and I want to thank you so much for posting it.

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